Alright so for english ive got to write a paragraph that catches people's attention and makes them wanna read on. could u guys tell me if this is any sort of hooking????? im bad at capturing attention:0 a reason why i am single at the moment lolz
Everyone has a secret.
Big or small, like it or not. Everyone you meet's hiding something. Your boyfriend, girlfriend, best friend, every single member of your family. You have one too, and so do I. Except, my secret's a little different.
Yours could be someone you have a crush on. A bad test score. Maybe a secret diary. But, mine? That's different. Not normal. Maybe a little insane, in your eyes.
Should you believe me? Yes. Because what ever label that the library chose to put on this book; may it be "fictional" or "fantasy," is fake. Not real. The English teacher who put this book on the list for fantasy book reports is greatly mistaken. And the literacy teacher that told you to make a project on this "made-up-story," is wrong, too.
But I'm right. This is real. Good luck on your book report, but believe me when I say this; everything I write here happened. I remember it all. But I don't have much time. So read quickly; but thoroughly. Because you need to know too.
Tell me I'm wrong. Go ahead, believe your teachers. I bet their really great. Let yourself be ignorant to what's going on in my world. Just don't be surprised when both our worlds ends.
If you trust me, then read on.
i know im really bad........... let me know tips?????????
THANKS I LOVE YOU ALL SOOOOO MUCH lol
I'll let cha kno wat grade i get, too
but its your fault if i fail!!!!